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25 January 2009 @ 09:07 pm
Looking Young and Cute  
Theme: Set Charlie # 10 Martini 30smiles 
Pairing: Sungmin/Eeteuk

Dedicated to: amine87  I know you like Eeteuk and Sungmin but I'm not so sure if you like them being paired up XD anyway, this is for you~ ♥

Title: Looking Young and Cute

Sungmin pouted. The bouncer wouldn’t allow him to enter the club. “Hyung, he wouldn’t believe that I’m in my 20s!!! Can you come over here and bring my id?” He said over the phone.

On the other line, Eeteuk laughed. “It can’t be helped that you look as cute as a newborn. If I didn’t know you, I wouldn’t believe that you’re in your 20s.”

“Hyuuung!!! Just come over here with my id, okay?” Sungmin pouted some more at being teased by Eeteuk.

After a few minutes, Eeteuk arrived with Sungmin’s id and showed it off to the bouncer. The bouncer assumed the it was fake and did a lot of inspections on the id which made Sungmin fume silent. Finally, they were allowed to enter the club.

But then, Sungmin encountered another problem. He went to the bar to order a martini but the bartender refused to give it to him. The bartender thought he was a high school student, who somehow passed off through the bouncer. Eeteuk saved him again by showing off Sungmin’s id, which was inspected carefully by the bartender.

“Damnit…I may be cute but I’m not young!!! I’m in my 20s!!! I’m old enough to do adult stuff!!!” Sungmin muttered as he drank everything in one shot. “Give me another one!!!” He demanded at the bartender, who hesitantly gave him a drink because he still believe deep down inside that Sungmin was just a high school student.

“I bet the people here think that I’m a pedophile or something.” Eeteuk said. He heard a couple of whispers (which can’t exactly be called a whisper since it was said loudly because people had to talk loudly for them to hear each other over the loud music of the club) questioning about Sungmin’s age and pointing out the Eeteuk was a pedophile.

“So now you don’t want to be with me because people might think you’re a pedophile?!?!”

“I did not say that.”

“No, you didn’t but you’re implying it!!!”

“I wasn’t implying anything!!!”

“If you wanted to be with me, then why have you touched me yet?!?!”

Eeteuk replied by pulling Sungmin to the dance floor. Crashing his lips against Sungmin’s as soon as they got there. Grinding his hips against Sungmin’s and hands wondering all over Sungmin’s body. “Don’t worry, I’ll make sure to touch every part of your body before this night ends.”

THE END

A/N: I never thought I could write Eeteuk this way O.O I find him quite seme here~ XD;;;
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Jishujishu on January 25th, 2009 02:01 pm (UTC)
yuh...shock gani ko~ lolz
kiirohanakiirohana_16 on January 25th, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
i don't know why~... but i like it!! XD and well~ teukee is very seme lately <3333 and that last line sounds HOT 8D
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:06 am (UTC)
I must agree *___*
Elleyea: Teukie Loveelleyea on January 25th, 2009 02:16 pm (UTC)
OoO
Hee hee hee!

Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:06 am (UTC)
XD hehehe!
faye-chanirant_imuse on January 25th, 2009 02:37 pm (UTC)
Hello!!

SungMin-oppa does have a baby face and it really is hard to believe that he's in his 20's. Can't really blame the bouncer and the bartender for being suspicious. XD

I've been reading your fics for quite some time and I find them really good. I'm looking forward for your future fics!

Oh, I have a question, are you and merashun from the Philippines? Coz I read your comments and your talking in 'Bisaya'.
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:08 am (UTC)
oh~ a fellow silent reader revealed herself!!! ♥
yeah, we're from the philippines~ cebu to be exact ^_^
And thanks for reading~ ♥
(no subject) - irant_imuse on January 26th, 2009 09:18 am (UTC) (Expand)
perfectfireskyperfectfiresky on January 25th, 2009 03:16 pm (UTC)
hahaha poor Minnie :D he's too cute to be in his 20's! XD

Teukie the pedophile lol!!! >_<'

for once, Minnie actually wants to be touched rofl...

“Don’t worry, I’ll make sure to touch every part of your body before this night ends.”
wow! Teukie! hot!! =P
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:13 am (UTC)
yeah...seeing as how he was avoiding Siwon and Shindong in the other fics XD;;
(no subject) - perfectfiresky on January 26th, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC) (Expand)
rokkugo_ogukkor on January 25th, 2009 03:36 pm (UTC)
Ang cute naman~~~~!
I got jealous reading merashun's comment 'cause it's in bisaya, and I took a while to think of a comment in bisaya (COMPLETE FAIL T__T), so I ended up doing it in tagalog...
DUDE THESE ARE CUTE! ^^ <333
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:14 am (UTC)
Hahahaha!! THanks for trying anyway~ Your effort in bisaya makes me happy XD
skyelar18skyelar18 on January 25th, 2009 04:29 pm (UTC)
poor minnie... that's what you get for being so cute!! kidding!

anyway, i like your cute fics. way to go!!
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:15 am (UTC)
woah~! you read even if it's not eunmin!! THANKIES SO MUCH~! ♥
pie.angel_fied on January 25th, 2009 05:06 pm (UTC)
yes Teuk is a pedophile. ♥♥♥
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:14 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAH!!!
eternalelfeternalelf on January 25th, 2009 05:12 pm (UTC)
OMG LOOOOOOOOOOOVE
btw whats a pedophile?
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:17 am (UTC)
an adult who has sexual desire for children or who has committed the crime of sex with a child

that's a pedophile XD
(no subject) - eternalelf on January 26th, 2009 11:33 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Sky: Ryeowookshinelikethesky on January 26th, 2009 12:31 am (UTC)
XD Lol, poor Sungmin. He's so cute, really.
But, I loved that last line, hehehe! ;)


Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:34 am (UTC)
He's cute enough to pass of as a BIG BABY!!! *_____*
Amelieladyrevania on January 26th, 2009 02:22 am (UTC)
lol, same thing happened to my friends, few days ago. They wanted to buy alcohol in club, but a bartender asked them about their ID's XD. It was strange, because I've never seen people asking about id's in the clubs here xP

It was so cute, I love TeukMin pairing ^__^. Semish Eeteuk is really hot @@
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 08:34 am (UTC)
People should write more seme!Teukie *_____*
kyuhyunlover3kyuhyunlover3 on January 26th, 2009 12:19 pm (UTC)
XD XD i feel late but XD XD X3 X3 LOVE IT!!! OMG!!!
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 01:18 pm (UTC)
even if it's late~ it doesn't make my love for this comment any less ^_^ ♥
Ming♥amine87 on January 26th, 2009 01:27 pm (UTC)
PEDOPHILEEEEEEEEEE XDDDD
YES TEUKIE IS A PEDOPHILE *squeals*


thank you dear ^^
I'm at friend's place, I'll make sure to comment properly at home ^^~
Jishujishu on January 26th, 2009 01:49 pm (UTC)
Re: PEDOPHILEEEEEEEEEE XDDDD
oh~ AHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!! XD
O.O - amine87 on January 27th, 2009 01:32 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Re: O.O - jishu on January 27th, 2009 01:42 pm (UTC) (Expand)
g_myzo on January 26th, 2009 05:11 pm (UTC)
poor minnie, his adorable cuteness makes him look young XD and teukie haha
Jishujishu on January 27th, 2009 08:33 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHAHAH!!! XD!!!
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Jishujishu on January 27th, 2009 08:33 am (UTC)
I'm influencing Sungmin on ya XD!