26 April 2009 @ 11:12 pm
Whom To Fall In Love...Murderer or Detective? (Chap 2)  
Theme: Set Charlie # 28 Welcome 30smiles 
Characters: Sungmin/detective (in this chap), murderer

Title: Whom To Fall In Love...Murderer or Detective?
Chapter 1

Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5 (end)

Chapter 2

By the time I left the hospital, my wounds were completely healed but the scars remained. These scars shall be the reminder of what happened that night. The detective offered me a ride home. Everyday, he would visit and ask the same questions about what happened that night and everyday, I would refuse to answer him. He just simply wouldn’t give up until he would get some answers from me.

When I arrived in the mansion, everything felt different. There was no security guard to check up my identity and the identity of the person I’m with. There was no security guard to operate the gate that would open up. There was no servant to open the car door for me. There was no servant to open the front door and greet me “Welcome back, young master.” There were no servants busy with cleaning or gardeners busy trimming the plants. There was nobody but me and the detective.

I looked around the mansion with the detective trailing behind. Everything was clean. Not a single drop of blood remained. No scent of decayed bodies. I was satisfied with how the house looked. Then my eyes trailed to the huge family portrait. My dad and his wives, me and my step brothers and step sisters. It was a huge portrait because we were a huge family.

“That’s really a huge family you’ve got there.” The detective said as he was also looking at the family portrait.

“They’re not family. They’re just strangers that I’ve lived with for a long time.” I never considered them as family. Whenever there’s a family day at school, I was always alone. Whenever there’s parents’ day, I was always the one without parents. I never even experienced having fights with my siblings. All of them either didn’t care or simply ignored me.

“You shouldn’t say that to your family.”

“Like I said they’re not family.”

“I know you’re hurt and all but you shouldn’t deny…”

“Do you even know what family means, Mr. Detective?” That got the detective to shut his mouth. I could instantly sense that he doesn’t have a family. I could only wonder how he lost his family but I shouldn’t care about that, right? “Anyway, I still have a lot of funerals to take care of. It’s going to be busy for the next few days.”

It was not easy to hold a funeral for the family members and the servants. There were a lot of visitors to entertain. The families of the servants just wouldn’t stop crying. Some of them even had the nerve to blame me for the deaths. Some of the guests just wouldn’t stop talking to me about their experiences with one of the dead servants or family members. I thought I would die by the end of the day.

The funeral was over and I was finally at home, lying on the couch because I was too tired to walk upstairs to my bedroom. “Don’t even dare to start interviewing me or start asking questions about that night. I’m too tired to deal with you right now.” I said towards the detective, who invited himself in my mansion anyway.

The detective always visited me everyday and sometimes very early in the morning or very late in the evening so I gave him an extra key to the mansion because I thought it was too bothersome to go to the door and open it up for him. “Okay, I won’t.” I’m very glad to hear that reply. For once, he was not being annoying or pestering me for some answers.

“If I’m going to die, who’s going to arrange and hold a funeral for me?”

“You’re not going to die.”

“Will I have visitors? Are there people who would cry for my death?”

“Like I said, you aren’t going to die.”

“Will you do me a favor and hold me a nice funeral if I die? I’ll be happy with just you as my visitor.”

“You’re not going to die, damnit!!!”

“What are you getting all emotional for, Mr. Detective?”

“I don’t like it when my client dies.”

“Is that all?”

We stared at each other for a while. His fingers threaded into my hair as he slowly pulled me for a kiss. I always knew he had special feelings for me. When I was in the hospital, the nurse told me that he visited me everyday while I was still unconscious. At first, I thought he must have wanted to be there when I wake up so he could instantly interview me. But then, the nurse told me that he would always bring fresh flowers. He would assist my body in doing passive exercises. He would do tepid sponge bath when I would have a fever from the infection of my wounds. He would always make sure that my body was in a comfortable position in bed. The nurse said that because he was very caring towards me, she thought that he must be my boyfriend.

He stopped bringing flowers though when I became conscious. Just seeing him was enough to make me annoyed because he would constantly interview me. When I moved back into the mansion, he would still visit me everyday but he would always bring some food and made sure I eat because I was getting thin. I didn’t notice how he had cared for me because I was always annoyed and irritated towards him because he never failed to try to interview me.

“Stay here. Live with me.” I said as we pulled apart from the kiss. I could tell that he was surprise. “You don’t have a family and you’re lonely right? Same goes for me so please…stay…” Even when my family was still alive, I’ve always been lonely. I needed someone and I could tell that he needed someone too. That way…we could both just have each other.

He didn’t go further from kissing me so I took the initiative to undress myself and offer my body to him. He took his time to kiss each scar on my body. He was slow and gentle that I almost cried out of frustration. He was teasing me too much. Every time I was close to cumming, he would slow down his ministrations. I never thought I would result to begging. “Please….harder…ah!”

“Only if you moan out my name.” His thrusts even became slower…very close to a stop.

What is his name…? I don’t remember but my voice seem to remember well as it moaned out a name. “Kibum!!!” His thrusts returned to a fast rhythm and brought us to completion.

I woke up to the smell of bacon and eggs. Following the scent, I arrived in the kitchen and saw him cooking. He wasn’t wearing his usual detective clothes. He was just wearing comfortable clothes, shirt and jeans plus an apron, probably because he was cooking. I don’t know why I’m happy to see this side of him. “You don’t have work today?”

“Ah, you’re awake. Good morning!” He smiled and placed the food on the table. “No, I told my boss that I would be moving in a new house so he gave me a day off today.” I ran up to him and gave him a deep kiss. I was happy that he decided to stay and live with me after all.

End of Chapter 2

A/N: So I guess I decided the detective would be Kibum...and so the murderer shall be... I'm sure most of you knows already XD;;; The murderer shall be back in the next chap ^_^ Please look forward to his return~ Comments please!!!! Make me more inspired ^_^


 
 
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Ming♥: 기범 || he's been missed. by everyone.amine87 on April 26th, 2009 03:38 pm (UTC)
KIBUMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!



THE LAST PERSON I EXPECTED, HONESTLY *___*


... and the murderer is KYUHYUN RIGHT RIGHT RIGHT XDDD~
Jishujishu on April 26th, 2009 03:50 pm (UTC)
Kibum and Kyuhyun are originally what I had in mind anyway XD I guess I'm sticking to them~ hahahaha~ for once, I'm going with my original plan XD;;;
Ming♥: 규특 || love does exist out thereamine87 on April 27th, 2009 02:23 am (UTC)
continue this... fast, okay? ^0^
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 04:33 am (UTC)
I think I'll take it slow....hahahahaha... XD
tammyapple_dub on April 26th, 2009 04:31 pm (UTC)
huaaa.... never crossed my mind that it will be kibum...
huaa....i'm anticipatingggggg..
can't wait for the next chapter!
Jishujishu on April 26th, 2009 04:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading~ ♥
huaaa~!!! ^_^
~~Kia~~: KangMinkiitha on April 26th, 2009 04:31 pm (UTC)
I was hoping that it was KiBum *-*
and don't be wrong and I am happy xDDD
I luv you because you're the only one who writes BumMin and it makes me happy cause there is almost nothing of them ;-;

I love this fic really, and I think KyuHyun is the murderer lol
Jishujishu on April 26th, 2009 04:42 pm (UTC)
so you remember me as a BumMin writer? lol XD;;;
Thanks for reading~ ♥
pink_kirby92 on April 26th, 2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
Kibum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kyuhyunnie is the murderer!!!!

Please update soon!! I'm so addicted to this!!!

Please make Sungmin fall for Kyuhyun!!!! TT______TT <333
Jishujishu on April 26th, 2009 04:53 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha!! We'll see~
Thanks for reading~ ♥
the other yuri: 키범sallysync on April 26th, 2009 04:55 pm (UTC)
OMG! JISHU!!!!!YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH YOU MADE ME HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!
KIMIN! OMG!!!! I never thought of Kibum because I'm such a KiHae biased person. BUT KIBUM IS THE DETECTIVE!!!!!!!!!!

and I know KYUHYUN IS THE MURDURER right???? KYUMIN!!!!! WAAAAHHHH!!!!!

OKAY...it's hard to choose....

I WILL STALK YOU! BEWARE!!!!
YOU'RE ALWAYS GOOD IN WRITING! AWESOME AND AMAZING!
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 12:48 am (UTC)
I'll call Detective Kibum and tell him that I have a stalker XD Hahahaha!!! jokez~ Thanks for reading~ ♥
eternalelfeternalelf on April 26th, 2009 05:26 pm (UTC)
KYU BABY IS THE MURDERERRRRRRRR?
*GAPES*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ZOMFG ALKA;LSKLASSSSSSSSSSSS
oh, so kibum's gentle xD thats the huge difference
OMFG CANT WAIT TO SEE THE MURDERER *remembers bloody smut*
actually i think it'll be more interesting with the murderer than the detective xD
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 12:51 am (UTC)
I think so too but some people would want to give a "good and honest life" with the detective XD;;; really..who knows..? I haven't even thought of what would happen in the next chap XD;;
eternalelfeternalelf on April 27th, 2009 01:02 am (UTC)
zomfg lol xD well kyu better make his appearance soon with a mind blowing not-really rape of lee sungmin! xD
just kidding, but he better be as fierce as chappie 1! XD
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
you're putting a lot of pressure on me XD;;;
eternalelfeternalelf on April 27th, 2009 01:41 am (UTC)
zomfg thats cause i know ur the one and only magnificent writer -puts on a 'duh' face-
fine, just make kyu come back and i'll be happy ^^
whos sungmin going to be in wonderrrrrrrrrrrr
sbluesnowsbluesnow on April 26th, 2009 09:05 pm (UTC)
OMGOSH BUMMIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SO SWEET AND CARING!
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 12:52 am (UTC)
Hehehe! Thanks for reading~ ♥
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Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 12:52 am (UTC)
Hahahaha~!! Yes, it's him~!
shining light: yesung sorry2 scanno_rulle on April 27th, 2009 03:50 am (UTC)
Ah~~ Unnie.. KiMin!! My latest OTP!! O__o
I'm back unnie... I miss you so much... *tackles you to the ground* Hehe...
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 04:35 am (UTC)
*falls to the ground*
yey! you're back!!! *huggles*
Thanks for reading~ ♥
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Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 04:36 am (UTC)
gi explainan pud xa sa nurse oie kung unsay buhaton...lolz
ako man ang nurse...BWAHHAHAHAHAHAH!!! wa lng ko nagpahibaw sakong identity sa fic...bWAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!!
RUN♥ミ: onewdoyouknowwhy on April 27th, 2009 04:14 am (UTC)
KIBBBBBBBBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUUUM!
i miss him more! XDDD
you updated really fast! I LOVE YOU! <3
update swiftly again. XD
i'm excited for kyu to show up. ;)
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 04:36 am (UTC)
depends if inspiration strucks me fast then I'll update fast XD
Thanks for reading~ ♥
g_myzo on April 27th, 2009 10:10 am (UTC)
another great chap. the detective is kibum! :D i'm anticipating when the murderer makes a re-appearance.. *0*
Jishujishu on April 27th, 2009 12:33 pm (UTC)
Thanks~ I'm anticipating it too ^_^
Sky: Sex 2niteshinelikethesky on April 28th, 2009 07:08 am (UTC)
Kibum is the detective! :)


“They’re not family."
It's sad when someone says that. D:
Jishujishu on April 28th, 2009 10:41 am (UTC)
lolz @ your avatar XD!!!
Thanks for reading~ ♥
I ♥ KyuMinsungminxx on April 29th, 2009 12:12 pm (UTC)
Goshh!
Kibum is the Detective!
I hope Kyuhyun is the Murderer!hahhhaha.
Just hoping that there's a kyumin in your story.
even though, I really love this!!
It's interesting!!
:DD

Jishujishu on April 29th, 2009 12:43 pm (UTC)
I'm sure you've read the next chap already and you should already know by know that there is Kyumin..lolz
Thanks for reading ^_^
leehyukkieleehyukkie on May 8th, 2009 12:25 pm (UTC)
weeee!!!hehehehe...XD kibum's the detective?whaaa?i didnt read it wrong right?kibum's the detective?hahahha....

anyway...i think the murderer should be kyuhyun..that'd be HOT!hahahah..XD

i'm off to the next chapter
Jishujishu on May 8th, 2009 12:32 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha...you'll see...^_^
hyejinnn on June 12th, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
HA! I KNEW IT WAS KIBUM!!!!!! :DDDDD
KIMIN (so far...who knows if he'll end up with the murderer...who seems really sexy O__O :X) YAYY YOU MADE ME REALLY HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 ^_____^
hahahheehhehehehahaha~
“If I’m going to die, who’s going to arrange and hold a funeral for me?”
“You’re not going to die.”
“Will I have visitors? Are there people who would cry for my death?”
“Like I said, you aren’t going to die.”
“Will you do me a favor and hold me a nice funeral if I die? I’ll be happy with just you as my visitor.”
“You’re not going to die, damnit!!!”

HAHAH I LOVED THAT CONVERSATION...idk why. BUT HAHAHAHA!!!!!!! hehe x]

Mr. Detective...huh huh so sweet~ <3
Jishu: Yoonajishu on June 12th, 2009 01:32 am (UTC)
It's suppose to be an angsty conversation but now that I've reread it... it's actually kinda funny XD;; Thanks for reading~ ♥
hyejinnn on June 12th, 2009 01:54 am (UTC)
HAHAHHAHA oh. ROFL. sorry! heh heh...
yupp noo problem ^___^
lovelysonatalovelysonata on June 14th, 2009 11:40 am (UTC)
LOL I had a feeling it would be Kibum! XP
Jishu: Tiffanyjishu on June 14th, 2009 12:47 pm (UTC)
ooohhh!! a new reader!! Thanks for reading~! ♥
lovelysonatalovelysonata on June 14th, 2009 01:09 pm (UTC)
Yes hello I'm a new reader! Hahaha! *bows head*
Autumn Snowstrawberry_dabi on July 29th, 2010 01:36 pm (UTC)
yah~ haha~
I'm having a "jishu marathon" ahahaha~!
<3
if I am to choose?
I would choose the murderer~ bad guys <3~
more more action
and even more exciting~ LOL
but yeah~ this one's hot!
I'm loving this story~ <3
Jishu: Sunnyjishu on July 30th, 2010 02:25 pm (UTC)
when you're young, you easily get attracted to bad guys~
but when you get old, you'll really start looking for good guys~ XD
wait.... what I said made me think of a plot... I should start writing... hahahaha!!! Thanks for reading <3
sujuaddict777sujuaddict777 on October 17th, 2010 12:58 pm (UTC)
WoW!!! Let me guess, you like Sungmin and Kibum being paired right? Because you always pair them with ur other fics!!!! I knew the murderer is Kyuhyun, hope they will end up together!! KYUMIN!!
Jishu: Seohyunjishu on October 17th, 2010 01:47 pm (UTC)
hmm... you'll see~ ^_^
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